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.Loft's Poem. by =kayzdayz:iconkayzdayz:



It's not like I've ever asked you what you think of me.
But suddenly,
I can't but help allow the questions to form.
Though it's felt no one could ever be better
Do I stand up to your needs?
Am I everything and anything..
..you expected me to be?

If it appears to sound too selfish
Kindly disregard,
To make you feel pressured..
Too Soon my heart.. scarred..

  If you ever need anything..
  Please look to me first.
  I want to be there for you.
  And suceed where I am worst.
  Though none can claim perfection
  And though I try to abide by this
  I give you fair warning, love..
  Your perfection is my insist.

My affection I often persist
And rueful as things may be..
Always allow me to express to you..
Your stress be mine to free!

  I feel as if I need to rebuild upon our trust
  Create our gentle emotions..
  And let things be decided by Us.
  
As shallow as true love is...
As fake as smiles may be..
There's nothing more true now..
Than the words you hear from me.

If the word,
To hear,
It scares you-
Restraints.
I'll never utter the word in your ear..
Nor force and disgrace.

  I must leave you with this choice now.
  Wait humbly for your response.
  I would wait forever, love...
  However that may be near..
  Or however far.
  Or perhaps...
  Never truly spoken.
©2005-2009 =kayzdayz
:iconkayzdayz:

Author's Comments

This is a poem I created keeping in mind of one of my Roleplaying characters. =3

..e.e.. I'm not new to poetry, but I definitely don't practice often. I've probably submitted this into the wrong catergory..and I think it's up for debate what it would fit under..but anyways..

I just thought those who know Loft...well...would get a better grasp of his over-bearing, sweet personality this way...^^

...ignore any grammar mistakes, xD.. I'm tired and will perhaps fix later on...

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:iconyuki-ryu:
O_______________________________________ _O *brain explodes*
That. Was. BEAUTIFULLYFANTASTIC! And lotsa other words I can't find to use at 9am and stuff. Butgod! Whoa. It was like... wooooow.

Lovely. Truly fantastic my dear friend :3

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♥ yuu
:iconkayzdayz:
o-o. Thank you, Yuki! You're so sweet!~ >w< ~ :hug: :dance:

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"Roses are red, violets are blue. World domination- just tell me what to do!" :evillaugh:
.:I.~A.M~K.Y.T.A.'S~B.R.O.K.E~T.W.I.N!!:.
Loft: ...we didn't use a calculator...we used the back of Bhirens head which doubles as a mathematical device-..
:iconyuki-ryu:
You're welcome :3 :hug:

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♥ yuu
:iconalona-spiegel:
I absolutely love this! It's so awesomely written, I can't even find words to explain how good YOU are with words! It really shows a lot of emotion too, and I can definatly relate to this poem with my love u_u;

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It's about that time of morning
when you are sitting in bed
and you are crying uncontrollably
and you are trying not to feel
but all you can do is feel
because everytime you shut your eyes
it's there...
~~Corey Taylor, Slipknot #8
:iconkayzdayz:
>w< Thank you!~ I'm suprised how many people like my poem. o-o... xD .. .. Anyways, thanks again!- and for the fav., too... :hug:

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"Roses are red, violets are blue. World domination- just tell me what to do!" :evillaugh:
.:I.~A.M~K.Y.T.A.'S~B.R.O.K.E~T.W.I.N!!:.
Loft: ...we didn't use a calculator...we used the back of Bhirens head which doubles as a mathematical device-..
:iconmywill1330:
Whoa your really good at poetry! :heart: :hug:

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(O.o ) your signature to help him
(> < ) on his way to world domination
:iconkayzdayz:
Thank you!~ ^^

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"Roses are red, violets are blue. World domination- just tell me what to do!" :evillaugh:
.:I.~A.M~K.Y.T.A.'S~B.R.O.K.E~T.W.I.N!!:.
Loft: ...we didn't use a calculator...we used the back of Bhirens head which doubles as a mathematical device-..

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